nice, i like it
I definetedly see potential in this, considering you're new, you are quite good. starting out with drum n bass is also quite hard.
Be aware, of that drum and bass has to be clear as well, the clarity wasn't that great, try to master your mix next time.
The drums could have some diversity as well.
For the effort, this gets a 5/5
check my stuff out as well, thank you!
MackerelSalad
thanks
i am pretty new to this so your comments will be very helpful thanks again
-weasel
WOW man!
damn, i listened to your previous work, you definetedly improved! I actually have no cons on this! It is repetitive, but you don't notice! Really nice! You from sweden? Jag är svensk! :P
Check out my page as well, dude! http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1254780&sub=637
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I've got this new ambient tune :)
ok this mesage is not for you......
ok everytime i put a music on nregrounds it always get lowered to like 2 or less so i am maybe gonna quit putting up music here because i dont feel like to put things up here if they dont get good score thank youo all for that and i think i should vote like 1 or 2 on songs now i to because even on bad song i not so bad. i can give them a 3 to be nice to them.but remember now. i am gonna vote low on your songs now
Have a nice day
wow
this would be perfect in a chase situation in some game, man. you really did great! I have not much to say...
Please check out my audio as well, and if you do, just the 4 newest, please xD, the rest is crap.
Hey, thanks for the input man, it out a smile on my face. I'm glad you liked it, and I'll have a look at your audio for sure.
THIS RULES!
DUDE, YOU THE GENIUS!@@$@$#@#$#^%@$@# PLEASE KEEP DOING THIS!
at least, i like drum n bass
check out my new drum n bass song as well : "Couch Loop"
thx for reviewing your stuff is real good I reviewed most of it.
Yeah
It has good sound, and that's just what music should have! hehe, nice showcase of beats, i could say.
but yeah, at least you not some guy usin' all them FL samples like most of us do (me, myself has sinned XD) but check out my new beat as well, it's called Couch Loop.
it's like this just some plain beats, but more of an arrangement
Thanks for the review! I do use some samples, not from FL but from other porgrams ;), ill check out your Couch loop!
Nice sound!
You've at least got your mix right, it sounds good, just you pumped it up a little tooo hard
if you listen to some other songs here, this one has too loud volume, so fix that, in your final version (if you make one, at least i hope so XD)
That fourth chord, shouldn't that be a minor chord, at least, the melody is playing the major scale, while if you listen to it, it would seem more logical in a way :P at least try and see!
check out my audio too please! :)
This is how I wanna sound :P
You are seriously the dream of every Audio Portal user... I mean, check my loops, they're ok, sound ok, but what you make, dude! It could be heard on mtv, whatever, and be appreciated! Reegz is real good, one of the best, but I doubt he's any better than the stuff you make! Most of the audio portal, is just something to rate, or to review, but things like this, is just really fun to listen to, real funky, fresh. The rap is perfect with the beat, and the beat is perfect as well... I'm out of words, I just wanna say: check my new three submissions, i've definetedly improved. At least I think, but I would love to get a opinion from you.
Peace, and I hope you'll come far(you'll come)!
Jay3.
Holy Shit!!! sounds like live...
but it isn't... or is it? is it FL Studio or what?
im really into jazz, this is the best i ve heard on NG man! if it´s FL, i´d really wanna do a collab sometime... i make jazz n stuff too on FL.
you can add me on MSN at jaytothathree@hotmail.com...
suberb!
Hi Jay! Well yes it is FL Studio but i have to say that drums are recorded loops and guitars are played by me and recorded in line. Pads and other stuff were written directly in FL as the effects (reverbs, equalizing etc..).
Thanks so much for the review.
sounds like a race kart with claps
"Enjoy and comment on how I could improve !"
Answer: Just don't post crap!
TEH BEST... <--well hell no
Sounds like the only drum you use is the standard FL kick inplemented in the layer "Dance"...
And IF u use a pre-created layer like "Dance" at least change something to make it original and certainly do not let it be the whole thing
nice idea with the whole... you know what... it was a good idea, but 1st time FL users always fuck ideas up...
It sounds just.. you know, stolen.
Quite standard cuz this is the type of music all beginners make
The only good thing in the song is when the dance layer goes duet lol
it's quite boring and stupid actually...
Still respect...
Just post good sh*t in the future OK?
I'll be watchin you!
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